The 22nd Machine

Got back from my writing group Wednesday night, with alot of good criticism on the first chapter of the book I'm writing, The 22nd Machine. It's set in an enormous, steampunkish city called Flind. The city has some similarities to to 19th century London, but some big differences too. Like it's not on an island, and it's actually a city-kingdom, and small, self-containted country. Here's the first chapter, for those of you who are interested. Enjoy! The 22nd Machine - Chapter One


Catherine_Creagan said...

Hey, I like it. Nothing beats random things happening to apparently British peoples.

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